Unknown Expectations

A warm, sticky evening, huge glowing moon.
Warm summer breeze, blowing the curtains
making ashes in the tray flutter around.
Cigarette glowing so red, it brightens your face, like a casino sign in the desert. This is summer, warm muggy evenings filled with unknown expectations.
Hurling toward life changing conclusions.,  Deluged by all these outside influences,
Grasping at these moments of simple friendship.
Doubt is the enemy, time pulling us apart.
Seems almost random, drawing it's conclusions.

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

Lol, .love the beginning great start love the conclusion because the house always wins.
Thank you for sharing

[Jimmy Crapped Corn]

Thank you Mauricio for reading and commenting

[Curly Grace]

A vivid, moody summer piece filled with tension, doubt, and unspoken possibility. Nicely done.

[Jimmy Crapped Corn]

Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment