school architecture

our school sucks so bad... they need some help, they lack the needed intelegence for running a school.

The school architecture is all messed up.

With vaulted ceilings and sky lights that do nothing,

A “Triangle” with ugly plants and a tree going inside.

A library with too few books

Class rooms with windows leading to the hall

And hollow stone pillars.

 

It was built as cheep as possible

Not fixing the leaks in the ceiling.

They prefer just replacing the ceiling tiles

when they become water stained,

And letting students walk around a dripping spot

for up to three weeks.

They have money for this and that,

For new computers and new books

But no money to fix the leaks in the roof

Or turn on the heat in the winter.

 

The built this new school in 1998

And already there are cracks in the walls

And major drafts.

Major pathways have too narrow of doors

Causing congestion in the halls, and tardy to classes.

 

I want to find the architect who designed the building,

The person who signed the checks

And the people who voted these two into the jobs,

And bash their stupid heads in,

For being so damn incompetent,

I could do a better job at it,

And I’m only 16!

Author's Note

comments, suggestions, thoughts, ideas?? thanks for reading =)