Moonlight Stranger

Riding on the back of time

I remember

What was that last September

I closed my eyes tight

And dreamed away

From the dark night

Escaped from this life

Just for a second

I got beyond

When i saw him

Standing on the street light

And he was so far away

Didn't know what to say

He grabbed my hand

Pull me into a dance

All i could do is stand

When he went away

Now all left is

That one light kiss

And a moonlight stranger i would miss

Reviews

[Ezekiel Silver]

I like how well you combine a sense of love and mystery in this poem! I do think you should have made it a little longer though. Still, an excellent piece all the same!

[Traci]

Nicely written, I could feel the honesty and emotion behind your words.

[zainul]

Very romantic ending.:)

[Everett DeValle]

Beautiful.

[Sami Khalil]

I like this a lot...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Jack...]

Very nicely done. I really felt the emotion this piece.