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Picture perfect,
              seen with a smile.
Status in the clouds
       seen there for a while.


Love display,
              placed on standby.
Feelings in the air,
                    placed to high.

 

Character offline,
              written off too send.
Words in the screen,

         written off in the end.

Reviews

[Poeticpiers]

I rather liked your theme. veritable truth. Persona on the line can appear much more than they actully are So we cut our losses and cancel them out. The format is attractive but would IMHO have been better presented in regular line lengths Youstuck to you rhyme patter until the final stanza
Plus one typo last line second stanza should be too not to?

all in all a damn good read

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A nicely presented, well written poem, addressing what has become a sadly common theme. Well done.