A No Name Basis

Take what you will from this.

Water gushing near and far,
round and round it goes;
faster than a speeding car.
Where it lands nobody knows.

Walking away from the time I knew,
living in the time with you.
I see you walking in my mind,
but I can't leave you behind

I miss seeing your face
and the smile I used to trace.
We have lost so much time.
I have to leave you lost in time

Tommorrow lost another new,
leaving you was overdue.
Never fade away too fast;
I want my image of you to last

Around my head spins,
I am lost yet again.
Please take away my pain
and don't ever say your name.

I loved you once but not again;
the person died within.
Now I am off to find
the hurt I left behind.

Today is my day of change.
Tomorrow I'll rearrange.
Yesterday was you
and tomorrow is the new.

When the dragon burrows again,
he will find another friend.
Today is the day of change,
the day with you no more.

Finding life in a shade,
walking under the krimson sky,
living a life you said to die.
I will I won't, I will I don't.

I will continue
Alone.

Author's Note

Written 6/1/07. Comments and ways to improve are always welcome

Reviews

[Lexie James]

I loved the lines

"I miss seeing your face
and the smile I used to trace.
We have lost so much time."

Something people tend to take for granted can be the things you miss the most.

"Today is my day of change.
Tomorrow I'll rearrange.
Yesterday was you
and tomorrow is the new."

The poem changes to a feeling of hope with these line.

Great piece.

[The Grammar Nazi]

That's honestly the best poem I've ever read. It's amazing..Although, I guess that might be partially because I have some issues of my own that relate. Ah, well, either way it's great. Needs spelling corrections, but meh lol. I know, I know. I focus on grammar too much, but eh, what can I say? I do it all the time...Lol.

[thecoolone52]

it was good i mean alot of people talk about heartbreak and stuff on here so maybe something more out of the normal would be better, but i mean for whats it worth it was good