He Is of the Universe

He was never yours.

He belongs to the universe

from whence he came.

You become what you were

once again.

Dust to dust.

Ashes to ashes.

From whence you came.

is are was were

once again...

Reviews

[Baban.A.A]

well I felt pity for the one who suffered this sorrowful repitition of life. to be honest, with me repitition is a slow dying, you have to alter the days in any way possible, because if you live just like the one in this poem, I surmise you are an animated dead. Though I can sense a story behind this poem, but you wrote something very true and wonderful, wonderful in content, though I like a different life for the speaker. well done. and best luck

[Diana]

Thank you. It isn't always a matter of choice.

[MoriartyMesa]

The Doors have a better wording then me https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3iM5lYqPxCo

[Diana]

Okay, thanks.

[00000000000000000000000..]

I loved this:) The breath of life:)

[Pryde Foltz]

A universe of meaning in this piece. We are so small and yet part of something immense. No one person belongs to another; yet we are all one. Well done.

[Diana]

Yes, so much so. Thank you for reading.

[sayed Mudasir Ali]

I am not surprised by this poem; I have already know tragedies better then this. Write something which is unique , I already have worst memories then this one .... ...... He was never yours , he belongs to the universe ............. Gone too soon .............Very common thing in life.

[Diana]

"I have already know better tragedies than this." if by better, you mean harder or more vile, it does not show. Clearly your "tragedies" have not taught you empathy, sympathy, nor anything akin to it.

You do not know my story, yet you assume you have been through worse. This poem is one tiny bit of a puzzle. Stop drawing false assumption.

Your review comes off as arrogant and mean-spirited. You may respond if you'd like, but I dare say I've heard enough.

[sayed Mudasir Ali]

Now this is what I really love and you did taught me a lesson which has lead me speechless here. I am not without emotions and it is truth that sometimes I do take pleasure from pain ; when it beats the hell out of me. I wrote one emotional poem 2 months back , I was told the same thing which I told you. My tragedies has taught me to love people all the way and even if they are animals.......We live such a age where in the devil wins the most souls. I have seen how people with power always escape and those who are innocent gets trapped and stranded.

[Diana]

A more insightful comment this time...

[sayed Mudasir Ali]

Well deserved!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"is are was were/ once again"

beautiful.

[Diana]

Thank you.

[sneer]

nice and compact-economical of word

[Diana]

Thank you, sneer.

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

Perfect write. Thanks for sharing.

[Diana]

Thank you.

[Lydia Shutter]

A very sad write, Diana. No, we can not own any living thing really. We often lose sight of that. Lydi**

[Diana]

Yes, thank you, Lydi.

[Sami Khalil]

One word : Awesome . In my library...:)

[Diana]

I'm glad. Thank you, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).............