Taken Under

Fickle and futile.

I am forever fighting

for a chance to break

the surface of the watery

dudgeon that has taken me under.

Reviews

[Cassie]

I think everyone has felt this way, i hope now you are feeling better.

[Diana]

Thanks, Cassie.

[Sami Khalil]

That is a sinking feeling and could lead to drowning. I hope you keep on fighting...Bravo..............

[Diana]

Thank you. Definitely some drowning metaphors above...

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Good to know...You are welcome...:)...................