eat my heart out

I smell her perfume on your shirt
It burns through my chest like acid

Lipstick stains your face
My skin melts away

I trace my fingers down the bruises on your chest
And my blood boils

When she's in your arms
You might as well eat my heart out.

Reviews

[ebur™]

simple and short, but very effective. I don't think it needs to have many words to it because the message was given clearly. great piece! :)

[PaperHearts]

I really liked this! It was so simple, yet I think it was the simplicity of it which made it effective. You captured the emotions so strongly, and I could totally relate to the feeling of having your "heart eaten out'. =P Really well-written descriptions too, creating emotionally evocative imagery. I loved the ending.
Nice write,
~PaperHearts =]