Future Child: Part Two

Future Child: Part Two

A Poem by Ah Puch
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This is the worst of the three parts.

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See us, although we are torn
pain so bold
Skin peeled away to be worn
Horror so cold
 
 
See my unborn child so far from my womb
his being so fragile
Barried so deep in this concrete tomb
Their actions so agile

© 2009 Ah Puch


Author's Note

Ah Puch
Fixed it up a bit for you. By Dekan.

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Your words beautifully support the lovely theme of your poem.


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Added on October 2, 2009

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First off, the name: Ah Puch is the Mayan god of death, we almost put Anubis, but we thought that was over done a bit. Second, the Royal 'We': This is not in fact a 'royal' we, it is more the fact .. more..