Our place between fire and stars.

We love and we die
between heaven and hell.
We fight and we kill
but from heaven we fell.
The drunken mad whispers
of the men in dark bars
are equal to the praise
we grant to the stars.
we wander and dream
of a place for ourselves.
so far from heaven
yet so close to hell.

Reviews

[FateDictates]

a clear revelation of the same thoughts that cross my mind..beautiful solid piece of writing that tells the truth.. curtsy bow

[Paul Ziakin]

Good stuff. Like it. A little "soft" for the subject matter? I can learn from this!!

[Cassie Black]

I like this a lot, it says so much about the world but also about natural human desires, good job!

[Perkele.7885]

Are we not now in a place for ourselves? Why are we so unhappy here until we meet are final demise? People want. People greed for. People want what belongs to others! People steal and kill. We deserve what we get for the kind of life we have led. We make choices and we pay the price eventually!