Lost and found

I look around, I see no friends
All alone I fall again
When you were here, you'd pick me up
Dust me off, we called it love
I said some things i can't take back
It wasn't me but you bought the act
Ran away to find myself
Now I'm lost I need your help
I turned  away and wound up here
Sold my soul I have no fear
I sank my ship, I crashed my car
Drove away and went too far
But if you want me I'm around
In the lost and found.

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

I like the poem indeed. I do not think that our fallen hero(ine) deserves their lover back just because he/she is now available in the lost and found. Why would he or she? Is there any proof of any change in the antics of our hero(ine)? Keep the poems coming!

[Sandra M. McLeod]

So sad : ( I think a lot of people can relate. Nice job.

[drandolph3]

Thank you. :)

[FateDictates]

I love your easy going style that comes across so effortlessly and still you manage to weave these words into images that appear in my head..yes..you take me there. love what you do with words...curtsy bow and thanks for sharing..

[drandolph3]

Thank you very much.

[drandolph3]

Thank you as well Perkele. The poem however, was about a person's reflection and less about a deserved end. Even a******s have regret, I would know lol. Oh and our hero doesn't change, because no one ever really does. You can't escape your shadow.

[drandolph3]

Drop me a comment and let me know what you think.