Autumn Breeze

Wrote this in 3rd grade...first poem I ever wrote! And even then I felt alone.

I stand alone

Swaying

In the autumn breeze

 

Wondering why

No one

Is swaying with me.

 

I go to the

Steady beat

Of my internal metronome:

 

My heart.

 

The wind rushes past me,

Traveling

To its unknown destination,

 

And I stand alone

Swaying

Wishing I could travel

Too.

Reviews

[Jules]

This has wonderful rhythm, and depth.

[Alexa Tasch]

nice i like the feel of it. it flows smoothy great job!

[Dalebear]

This is a beautiful write....very amazing and deep
Thanks for sharing
Good wirte
Dalebear

[Lauren Beth]

This is impressive if really written in the 3rd grade...very deep and surely beautiful. Thanks for sharing. I love it :)

[chillz]

beautifully written...amazing write ~chillz~