Perfect Fourth

a distance of four keys
your fingers cannot reach

yet i'd journey all eighty eight
to set your smile straight

Reviews

[Pippa Stoneheart]

this is what i call effortless and personal.... great job. you have a flair for words and it's much more than just talent. it's a special gift. it's like, even if there are less than twenty words to choose from, you'll still come up with something nice.

[Kate Hunter]

short, yet sweet. Nice job. You have a lot of potential. Don't give up on your talent.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

I cannot but smile like a complete fool...your poem reminds me of another traveler of keys I once had the privilege to meet :) You mesmerize with the rare, ethereal fibers cast from the depths of your clearly lovely soul :)

[David W Moore III]

I have a sweet spot in my heart for all things musical. So this piece earns it's spot. Nicely written.

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. beautiful ... melodious ... magical ... and of course ... musical ...

[Lilly]

Very nice poem - short and sweet.

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very kool-creative!!!
...i love this!!!!!

james:-)