Daggered, Again

Sort of a physical sequel to Daggered

 Thought I'd made it;

survived the test.

Tried to go on with life,

only to taste my blood;

feel the invasion of blade.

I'm falling.

Once again, I've been daggered.

Author's Note

Let me know what your thoughts are.
Thanks for reading. :)

Reviews

[Dreamer]

hmmm yes, these things tend to happen especially when we least expect it. Always keep an eye open...always look behind our back (if enough to drive u crazy). Yet keepin God as an active aspect in our lives is more than enough to keep us going. U've been "daggered' before and survived so... lets see u fight to survive again. Good work

[Yina]

Yikes! Suddenly I hurt....... You're all to good at making stuff feel real:( lol
Great though! I picture that one dagger with your name on it, ya know?:)

[Aly Jones]

I like how it included the title (in some form). I like the emotion of it.

[paradise]

Very simple but I rezally like it :D

[Richard Anthony Goulart]

This is a very simple yet a very strong piece. I loved it and thought that this was great.

[Poe Redd]

"Only to taste my blood; feel the invasion of blade." That's gorgeous. You're so goth through poetry. x3 Love you so much!

[Science girl]

I like this one as well, but the original will always be my fav :)

[Thea]

I agree with Coyote...That's just how life goes on...This poem was really short but I gotta say that the meaning/idea was well said... :)))

[Coyote Poetry]

Life can have those surprise attacks. I like the short poem. In a few words create a situation and a ending. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote