For us only

this poem is for you
for your smile and your eyes

for your charming voice and ambiguous chatter

this poem is for me
for my hopeless hope,
my in-love heart

and for my never ending playlist

...which reminds me of you

this poem is for us
for yesterday, tomorrow, and what is between

for me the sickness, and you the cure

this poem is for no one

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I like the way you have approached this poem. It is sad. It makes me sense unrequited love. That can happen to anyone. Very nicely conveyed.

Chris

[goldenscar__]

I think unfulfilled love is meant to be experienced. It's Ok, people learn best through the hard way.
Thank you dear Chris for your kind words.

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome. Unrequited love is painful. I wouldn't wish it on anyone.

[goldenscar__]

Neither do I. Love is important

[Amy R]

so sweetly written,
loved all the words,
keep writing great poems 🌹

[goldenscar__]

Hi Amy, I'm glad you like it
Thank you for reading. hugs

[Amy R]

You're welcome,
I'll keep checking ur works! :)
hugs

[A hare off]

And it could be for everyone. I really enjoyed how you did this. I like the way it falls gently down until the final line, which prompted me to say it could be for everyone, at least everyone who enjoys it. Still I find a touch of sadness lingering in these thoughts, if I read it correctly.

[goldenscar__]

Yes, it is a story of an unfulfilled love

[CD Campbell]

Is the poem for no one at the end because there is no longer an "us" when all is said and done? Thoughtful work. Look forward too reading more. CD

[goldenscar__]

thank you.. the poem is for someone who is nowhere to be found. He's there then he's not

[Iam-me]

Aw, this is so delightfully sweet and wholesome. And gives me goosebumps on my skin. Amazingly lovely. And the true meaning of love.

[goldenscar__]

I felt so dumb while writing this poem.. it's currently my favorite.

[Iam-me]

Don't feel dumb for writing such a heartfelt beautiful piece of poetry. To be honest. I love this. And be proud. Not embarrassed by sharing beauty in this world. Hugs Dawn.

[goldenscar__]

Thank you Dee, I really am cheered

[Iam-me]

My pleasure. Prefer Dawn. as it is my proper name thou. Wink.

[goldenscar__]

Okay, Dawn. *smile*

[Iam-me]

thanks. :)

[wordman]

beautiful thoughts,this is for you..

[goldenscar__]

you're a good poet, this is for you..

[wordman]

and i`m blushing,thanks,,

[goldenscar__]

you're most welcome