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Laying in bed all day.
Trying to escape the sorrows of my reality but instead being consumed by it.
A rain cloud over my head, how cliche.
Even in my depression I'm no different than anyone else.
How can I go on.
People complain about their lives saying they take one step forward and go two steps back?
I wish I had one step forward but I just have three steps back.
Actually I don't wish.
I embrace my depression.
It's the only thing that's been there for me.
How pathetic I am.
Not even acting sad because I don't want your pity.
Just One day I'll lay down to rest and never get up.
And don't feel sad for me, it's my time to go.
Even though I chose it myself.

Author's Note

My first poem since like 5th grade. Tell me what you think. I'm not suicidal haha I just felt like writing this for some reason idk.

Reviews

[Nosce Te Ipsum]

I completely understand how you say you're not suicial, yet you're embracing your depression. It's nice to know that others feel that as well. And thank you for your review on my work.

[Balls:)]

dude,

thats really deep and emotional.

you said you're not suicidal, so it's really good if you can just come up with that off the top of your head.
i love it!! lol :D

[Solitary Dreamer]

I know how you feel... Nice poem.. but I just don't get why people complain when they know your life is so much worse.

[deeps]

This is a well written here and relateable.
I like this alot. Very well expressed

[I'llPlayTheJuliet]

This was very relatable, I Enjoyed reading this because it gives depression a new direction, almost an acceptence. Really nice. I hope to read more from you I truely liked this. xD

[Adora.xo]

Hm, very nicely written, love. It definitely captures depression as an emotion and action. Good job!

~Adora