The Malady is Victorious

A woeful poem. Depressing. Excerpt:Life has ceased, death has not arrived, and I am in a constant limbo between the two, a child in a divorce.

I am nostalgic

after memories

never made.

I am

in a tunnel

that never ends.

 

Life has ceased, death has not arrived, 

and I am in a constant limbo between the two, 

a child in a divorce.

I am frozen 

under the sun and

The malady is victorious.

Reviews

[bobc]

A...I like this very much...the juxtaposition...strong ending. Could share a suggestion the tunnel stanza, if you liked? ...bobc

[Aisha Mnd]

Hello! Sorry for the late response. I was quite busy with school. I'm glad you enjoyed reading this piece, and you are more than welcomed to offer a suggestion! - Aisha Mnd

[bobc]

A...no apologies needed...life has its priorities. I have to admit that, for the life of me, I can't remember what occurred to me for the tunnel stanza. If it comes back to me, I'll post it here. Sorry about that...bobc