I Like

I Like

A Poem by Doreen
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(The photo is my creation)

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I like to put my toes in a cold stream on a hot day

and watch the icy water re-direct itself to accept me. 


I like how it feels to wiggle my toes as I grimace in pleasure, sucking air through my teeth, then shiver and giggle out loud.

 

I like the memory of climbing onto the roof as a child to watch the sun rise, feeling like the only person alive at 5:30 in the morning.  


I like the nostalgic feeling I get when I wake to see the horizon in a blaze of burnt sienna and move to a dusty gold then gentian blue. 


I like a fresh cup of apple cider on a fall day when the leaves are in bold, beautiful shades of amber, lemon, and crimson.  


I like the feeling of my cheeks being chilled by nipping air, of being just warm enough in a favorite, thick, soft sweatshirt.


I like the way the air smells of moss and clean soil

after a summer rain.  


I like the feeling of humidity that dances over my skin before a cool breeze gently blows making goose-bumps stand on my arms.


I like the quiet hush as it snows at night, the glinting of light off the flakes making it look like magic.  


I like the way it compresses under my feet when I walk on it, making a sound like giants eating cereal.  

© 2015 Doreen


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A lot of great "feelings" in this piece of delightful work. I enjoyed the read. I like the photo as well. F.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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The simple joys of life
In the smallest of things

Spiritual :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Doreen

10 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
I've never really experienced any of these thing that was described in the poem, but the words you used were so vivid and realistic that I felt I experienced all of these things in my living room right now.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Doreen

10 Years Ago

I'm glad I was able to bring that forth. That was my intention. Thank you for reading.
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I like this much my Doreen

Posted 10 Years Ago


Doreen

10 Years Ago

I'm glad you dropped in and let me know.
I like the mind within this...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Doreen

10 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by.
Chris

10 Years Ago

Was worth pausing and letting the coffee get chill
well I like most all these things too except getting on the roof at 5.30 I love a sunset but not that much
unless you have a tar beach just out the window

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on November 3, 2013
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Doreen
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I’m a writer, a reader, a dreamer, head in the clouds, feet off the ground. I love dragons and wizards, potions and hobbits. Aquarius by nature, and a bit wacky at times. I write poetry and sho.. more..