Raining

A Cinquain

Raining
Bulbous globes
Aquarius pouring
Chilly, wet, drenching, refreshing
Dripping

Author's Note

I love trying new forms. Enjoy.

Reviews

[New Dawn]

great write - i feel the need to grab a towel now and dry off :)

[Doreen]

Thanks for stopping by. :)

[Relic]

Bulbous globes I never thought of them that way. Nice writing.

[Doreen]

Thank you, Relic. I hope all is well.

[Robin]

nice !

[The Perfectionist]

A Cinquain! I haven't seen one of these in forever. They're so cute and so utterly impervious to my saying anything against them unless you did it wrong. I don't remember exactly how it works, and I'm far too lazy to look it up, but this looks right to me, and unfortunately, there's just nothing more to be said.

[SOUL LESS]

I loved writing these and haiku's when i was 10. Now i write longer poems. Great job.

[Moflo]

This is interesting in this form. I like the way it came out, so simple and complex at the same time. Good job.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Snowing here! lol This was a nice expression of the rain.

[Creepy Swine Guy]

Very nice. It is descriptive and soothing. It makes me want to stand shirtless outside with my arms outstretched to the heavens. This would be a problem, as it is about 12 degrees outside here.

[OT]

smoking the old experimentation pipe again today? haha you fiend!! this is nice!! simple but says a lot! and you've packed in a whole load of synonyms for dripping haha very nice! you sure you ain't British? haha