My Body is a Canvas

Heavenly...(The photo is my creation)

 

My mind is the landscape

where you spend every moment

in vivid memory, making me smile.

My lips are for kisses

soft as tiny dandelion seeds

      f   l   o   a   t   i   n   g

on downy breath hastened

by your closeness.

My body is a canvas

for your fingers to trace pictures

of silky, passionate scenery

filled with warmth and vibrant color.

Author's Note

I'm not sure if this is finished. It seems like it's missing something.

Reviews

[David Scott]

Paint me baby! (not you, Doreen, my lady love should do the painting)
I enjoyed this poetry.
The break and "tie in" was perfect here.

[Doreen]

Thank you, kind sir. Yes! Paint away with your lady love. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Very sensual poetry , I love it ;)

[Doreen]

Thanks for stopping by. I appreciate it.

[Renée]

Oh its seems perfect to me...dreamy, sensual and just lovely ( :

[Michael X]

tracing the aura of love, the landscape and sense of dreamy illusion create a
cloudscape of warm sensuousness, where chances and bliss flow into one,
romance set to adventurous height of intentions to whisper a dream to
the winds herd by the love, such is poetry and the muse, beautiful work :)