Patheticaly Dumb

Just one of my political poems...

A Society So Damn Eyeless They Sit back While

They Are Imprisoned By Their Hebetudinous LifeStyle

Unable To Catch The Signs Of Suicide

Praising Leaders Condoning Genocide

They Call It Comfortably Numb...

I Call It Pathetically DUMB!!!

Voting For Lies, And Mother Fuckers in Pastel Ties

Walking Contradictions/ Desperate Conditions

Elephants and Donkeys

Nothing More Than Suit Wearing Monkeys

Weights And Measures Only Pertains To OIL

While Priceless American Blood Stains The Soil

So Feed Me Another One

I Tell You Its All Done

All Chance Of Survival Is Lost

When The Constitution Is Sold By Angel Soft!!!

Reviews

[Butterflymom]

This makes an intense and profound social statement. It was very well done, and wonderfully expressed.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow.. now this is truly release.. I applaud you on such open and brave words.. your last line while humorous.. is sooo sadly true in metaphoric meaning.. undertones of possibly suppressed and built-up frustration that while some will fear to comment.. they are thinking some of this deep down! What is more damaging containing these emotions or releasing them? We all fear our words may go too far.. but it's truly unhealthy to sit in your home and just manifest it. Drugs? So many are self-medicating and being medicated.. this is even more unhealthy! I love the fire that is breathing out of you as this comes to life on the page! Thank you so much for sharing.. I am happy that there are some not afraid to voice their opinions.. which is a right in US. =)