whataboutmyoutfitscreamsattentionwhore?

there are those who blame

ObamaCare

for the dismay in the dreams I've shared.

Jay, who says he's the T

in LGBT

wears a wool coat over waist shaping

pantyhose and a matching leopard print bra.

And the sun,

apparitional and ghostly;

she of absolute magnitude

and beauty,

did so shine,

anyway.

Reviews

[ANTO]

This is brilliant in my book. I dont have a book but if I did this would outshine the attention w***e in it - if the attention w***e AND this poem were both in it - said aforementioned imaginary book that is, lol.
Great stuff.

[Delmar Cooper]

"The sun don't shine on the same dog's a*s everyday." My grandfather. "But, it does shine on somebody."
Me

[Ed Hart]

yes, and tomorrow was always going to have this days name on it...no one to blame, no one to praise...just watch the sun shine in her absolute magnitude and beauty, anyway

[jacob erin-cilberto]

what a great portrait you painted here with your words...

"do dodo dodo doddododododododo"

"and he was a she" said "hey baby, take a walk on the wild side"

[Samuel J. Fox]

Damn girl. This poem gave me some goosebumps. I love the final two lines and how they wrap up the sense of society and nature and how nature couldn't care more about our dispositions or identities. I love also the personification of the sun as a she. I don't know how I feel about the first three lines. They don't seem to fit the poem, though they are poignant. Great poem. Love it!