love

love

A Poem by h d e rushin

was it a tear or

partridgeberry that brushed against my face/

of

just an angels rendered judgment

that accepts this human race?

© 2014 h d e rushin


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Has style and creates a mood.
What's not to like?

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like short poems like this that's in haiku format. This poem is like a piece of art, that you can look at one thousand times and see things that you didn't see the first, second or third time.

Posted 11 Years Ago


That's an awfully ambitious title, and I am in no way kidding. If you do not have the ability for acceptance (and you may be correct, it may be primarily the province of the angels), then you cannot have love, can you?

Posted 11 Years Ago


I read this about 9 times and at the tenth started feeling at ease, started feeling that everything is going to be alright. Well thats what your poem game to me! Thank you

Posted 11 Years Ago


the human tear, emotion, sadness, gladness, humanness...something brushed against my face, i think it was love.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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h d e rushin
h d e rushin

detroit, MI



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black american poet living in detroit. more..