this time let's give a name to fate

Easily

a runaway train

could jump the tracks and kill you.

Two old lovers in a garden hugging?

Not so much.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Fate had many meanings. I believe we decide our fate. Good or bad decisions can send us on a good journey or not. I liked the poem. You said a lot in so few words.
Coyote

[Cory Barrett]

That run away train... it's fate, hell we would have nothing else to call it that would sound beautiful. Both those old lovers; they gave fate a whole new name, and a far more beautiful one on the human spectrum.

Tenacity.

[Beccy]

Survive the runaway train that is life, then hugs in the garden are the blissful reward.

Beccy.

[Corset]

why is it that when I read this I hear "sticks and stone may break my bones but words will never harm me?" words do the very worst harm, once spoken can't be undone.

[Ed Hart]

thinking of runaway trains makes me want to hug and hug, especially in the garden (which i am busy planting)

[Isabel25]

Well...atleast they died in each others arms :/ :|