dominetrix seeking slave

for loretta

dear proprietress:

I freely submitted to the role play; the

experiment with restraints, ribbons and scarves,

and yes, the handcuffs hurt a bit

as did the bridle. The leather mini skirt

left an awful welt. And as you said

the lash was saved just for me,

the shameless adventurer. Yet,

in my next life, thongs will not be

my wardrobe choice in underwear.

My podiatrist said that stiletto's will

eventually ruin my knees. There's

little question that mine are already ruined.

When I laid in the corner, crumpled,

begging for air, it was just a reflex response

to being choked. And yes,

I heard Mrs. Carter pounding on the

ceiling with the end of the broomstick.

Well  anyway,

ring my phone when you get home so

i'll know you made it home

safely.

Loveya..

Reviews

[wolfshrew]

I smiled, smirked, laughed.
The narrative of someone with a habit to submit keeps me endlessly entertained, you wrote it wonderfully.

[h d e rushin]

thankyou my friend...Just getting back in town from the new year.....Good words are
always appreciated...dana

[writing mojo]

again you take on the form of something sexless, A+ not many can achieve such a thing with words, just the cutting and trimming solo presence by nature vs nurture skinned deep in a dream ..excellent piece

[h d e rushin]

thank you Josh.....much love dear brother....dana

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes we just thrive on pain and drama...it makes us feel alive...even though our heart dies a little each time...

home safely...for now.

[h d e rushin]

"sometimes we just thrive on pain and drama" but at the end of the day we whisper softly
in our lovers ears.......thank you my friend....dana

[W.k.kortas]

There is, as the wise Ed says, a whole bunch of funny herein, but there's enough wry mortality peeking around the corners to remind us that things are funny only because other things are very much not.

[h d e rushin]

sometimes i'm a crazy person trying to write poetry...other times, i'm a poet trying to recognize craziness.....thank you my friend....dana

[Ed Hart]

this is crazy funny,,,first class, butt slapping, pinchy pinchin' laugherous...you outta see what i just found in the closet

[h d e rushin]

i'de love to know about it Ed. lol

thank you my friend....dana