Promise

A Poem by dsouzaman

The idea of heaven, not as a generic paradise, but as a personalized world, shaped equally by your past failures, and successes.

The promised expanse.
Your vision expands.

Suddenly, in view,

every goal,

met and unmet.
A landscape of ideas,
carved from regret.
This vision is you.

© 2018 dsouzaman

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sette

i like the message and content of the poem

Posted 7 Years Ago

7 Years Ago

Thanks! Glad you liked it.

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dsouzaman

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

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I'm fascinated with the how poetry can evoke feelings in you like nothing else. My favourite poems are "Ozymandias", "The Raven", "Aedh Wishes for the Cloths of Heaven", "The New Colossus", and th.. more..