She speaks

I wish I could return to the dream.

Soft words spoken sweet,

hungry my ears are for them,

once again, I wake.

Reviews

[Poet Pittinix]

Very good. I wrote a few pieces on real dreams that I had.

[Dave W.]

Thank you very much

[Marie]

The soft words heard in a dream are much longed for, to be heard once again, on waking. You have captured your dream superbly in this Senryu, Dave. I like this Senryu very much. The syllable count is perfect, the number of lines are perfect and through your words you paint an excellent picture of how much you desire to hear the words you heard in your dream once more. I hope you can remember them, because they will never be lost and will live in your memory. Lovely work, Dave. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading very much...

[Dave W.]

I am glad you liked it, thankyou for reading it, I hope you have a great day.

[Marie]

Thank you, Dave. Most welcome always...