Treasure

All you have are the moments you make...

Moment’s memories,

gems gleam in reveries light,

rainbow's colors shine.

Author's Note

Take care not to waste important moments.....

images off of google....

Reviews

[Lorry]

So fleeting it is easy to take moments for granted, but before you know it, it is gone and before you know it, that free rainbow glinting is forever lost.
Nicely captured.

[Dave W.]

Thank you Lorry for reading my review

[Chris]

Spot on... and google wasn't needed - your words say it all.

[Dave W.]

Thank you sir,

[Anastasia]

Oh wow. Now that saying something.

[Dave W.]

Thank you for reviewing my poem, hope you have a great day

[red93]

An Excellent Haiku in the 5-7-5 format. Nicely penned Dave ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Dave W.]

Thank you Red, has it been a good day?

[red93]

👍👍👍👍👍

[Marie]

The moments become memories and they can be like resplendent and beautifully honed gems, or they can be dark and dismal when recalled, it is all up to us as individuals to make the best and happiest memories to become our treasures as we grow older. A superbly inked Senryu, so eloquently expressed. Kudos on an amazing write, Dave. Thank you for sharing...

[Dave W.]

Well thankyou for the kudos Marie and the kind review.

[Marie]

Most welcome always, Dave. Well deserved...

[Writergurl]

This is so beautiful
lovely write

[Dave W.]

Again thankyou for the kind words. Hope you have a great day.

[Patricia Wedel]

When my eyes were baby blue.. I saw Colors in the Ocean ‘s Rapture. softly. Pat

[Dave W.]

I like this so much, thank you