Whimsical words wrongly worded

Excessive exercise in erroneous errors.....

Dizzy spin-spun spindle supposing sleuth 

Snuck sneakily snooping and snaggle toothed 

Seeking sought satiated snakes snarling snoop

Seriously sapped succoring seals sonorously snoozed 

Slugs slinked and slimed slurping slop smooth 

Slack slow sloths sleek slyly speaking slanderous truth

Sacked suckers supped sloppy stew sop vermouth

Sanguine swallows squealed in squalid ignorant youth

 

Author's Note

Just jammed juxtaposed jingles joyously jostled...

Reviews

[Marie]

Nice play with words, Dave...

[Dave W.]

Thank you Marie

[Vol]

Dave,
I did a similar thing...

ACCUMULATIVE

The acolyte acrolith,
acumbent in the acrid
acre, sipped acanthus
vinegar  from a crystal
acetabulum to watch
with acciptrine eyes
the acrobat recently
awakened from an
aconite draught,
attempt to abnegate
his acarpous appendage
in stony silence.

Vol

[Dave W.]

Oh very nice

[John the Baptist]

I never knew alliteration was another language.

[Dave W.]

Alot of hissing, have a great day.

[carl]

Thufferin' thuccotash! I tawt I taw a puddy tat! - excellent alliterations and rhyming - fun read. -carl

[Dave W.]

Thankyou Carl, it was fun to write

[Brandy]

Ummm, reading this, is like repeating a tongue twister. Challenging, but fun. : )

This is clever and so creative, Dave.

[Dave W.]

Thank you Brandy, I was going for fun.

[An owl on the moon]

Sanguine and squalid in splendid disguise,
Sweeping us under their snaky-eyed sighs.
A smattering of sounds—sublimely smooth!

[Dave W.]

Yes, fantastic, thankyou for the review

[Ken Simm.]

God help you if you have a lisp. Whimsicality squared.

[Dave W.]

Thankyou for the review

[Tumi]

Very, Very, Very, very good, haha
a superb alliteration and rhythm, enjoyed reading

[Dave W.]

I enjoyed writing it

[Soren]

Alliteration extreem that flows in a stream. All with rhyme leaving a feeling sublime. A fun read my friend.

[Dave W.]

Thank you I love your ryhmn

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I think you should try to write a poem using a little alliteration....ha ha.

This is splendid superbly done surprise satisfaction sating the searching reader's supposition...or something similar.
j.

[Dave W.]

Thank you, I was going for something fun to say but not so.much logic.