Auburn fire

A Poem by Dave W.

Red hair is awesome

Her face in my mind,

auburn hair flows in the wind,

heart aches for a kiss.

© 2024 Dave W.

Author's Note

Love the autumn love

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Jeyanthi

Red hair is awesome... I remember the movie "brave"...
Lovely writing..

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 Year Ago

Jeyanthi thank you so much for the kind words.

Marie

A beautiful Senryu filled with longing and so romantically inked! Excellent choice of graphic to complement your words, Dave. Lovely little gem...

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 Year Ago

Thank you Marie, for the review.

1 Year Ago

Most welcome, Dave...

Lorry

Well coming from a country that practically invented redheads (I know it was Ireland, but we were from there long before we decamped to Scotland when someone said "Follow me, I know a place even colder!) I would advise never turning your back on a redhead. Its not only their hair that is fiery. I used to date one, right up until my insomnia made it impossible to fall asleep in the same zip code as her for fear of waking up without my bits!
They be crazy! 😃

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1 Year Ago

I don't care if they are crazy, red hair and green eye is my kyptonite.

1 Year Ago

I do like green eyes though. My own thing though would pair them up with raven hair. Much safer! �.. read more

1 Year Ago

And then if there's an accent, I'm done for

Tumi

Lovely haiku! The image of flowing auburn hair is clear, and the last line really shows deep longing. It beautifully captures a quiet, heartfelt moment.

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 Year Ago

Thankyou Tumi

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Added on November 1, 2024
Last Updated on November 1, 2024

Author

Dave W.

Tigard, OR

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I love to write poetry and hope that something I create will connect with someone that needs to read it more..