Morning walks.....

Just walking and thinking

Silent still, 

crisp clear, 

calm collected, 

refreshed renewed, 

mindful morning, 

wandering wonderer, 

longing look, 

continuing constitutional, 

roaming randomly, 

recollecting remnants, 

willful woes, 

finished fitness.  

Author's Note

Trying to say more with less....

Reviews

[Marie]

A beautiful play with words in this excellently inked poem, Dave. You have captured through both excellent word choice and depiction the great joy of a morning walk and the benefits of being fit as a result. Lovely work! Thank you for sharing, Dave...

[Dave W.]

I was trying to say more and write little, thank you as always

[Marie]

You did an awesome job in doing exactly that, Dave. I enjoyed reading very much...

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Smooth and succinct. I love those morning walks, myself, especially now that it's Autumn. Nicely written.

[Dave W.]

Thank you Fabian for the review.

[Pete]

nothing better to clear the head. you took me there and i'm all the better for it.

[Dave W.]

Sweet, thank you for the review