Filled to empty

Filled to empty

A Poem by Dave W.
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Gray is my color, charcoal hues, smudged fingers, dirty clothes.......

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Full from emptiness

as a heart that bloodlessly beats

 or lungs bereft of breath

 

circumspect I look to an

overcast horizon for dawn's light

not even a ray of hope

 

clouds continue on and on

 monochromatic gray that oppresses

that weighs down

 

the worm is a caterpillar

without hope of change

 

this day

this week

this month

this year

still the same

 

will there come a savior to pull me from the depths below

I am still waiting

 

will the heart heal from scars of the past

I am still waiting

 

will the storm subside

I am still waiting.....I call out, echo replies silence.........

© 2025 Dave W.


Author's Note

Dave W.
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I'm so sorry. Beautiful work.

Posted 10 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dave W.

10 Months Ago

Thank you, I have kind of been walking in a very low place for some time.
Those clouds weigh heavy. Scars from the past can take a long time to heal. I feel a desperate situation here of wanting to be rescued. Wanting change , but no glimmer of light. A difficult situation for anyone to be in.

Chris

Posted 10 Months Ago


Dave W.

10 Months Ago

Very perceptive. Just longing for the storm to clear
Chris Shaw

10 Months Ago

Hopefully it will be soon.

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Dave W.
Dave W.

Tigard, OR



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I love to write poetry and hope that something I create will connect with someone that needs to read it more..