Dreamers dreams

Do you feel as I do??????

 

Does your mind wonder my way

when alone, away from the noise

 

am I there in the comfort you seek

 

when your heart beats

does it beat for me

 

do I even show up

in your list of wants and desires

 

whilst dreaming are we together

 

when I'm gone does longing

become your food and drink

 

when I return does joy as well

 

do these feelings grip

do they resonate in your being

 

do you understand this is

where I am when I think of you

 

my habitation is this

place of pleasure and pain

 

when I am without you

 I am without my necessary air

 

 when I am without you

I am without I am without my necessary peace

 

when i am without you

I am a stranger to myself

 

return to me my love  

be not far away gone

 

let us walk together

these lonely lands

 

let us dream the dreams

only lovers can have.......

Reviews

[ETERNITY]

Hello, beautiful poet, IF I were the subject of your writing, I would answer Yes to every question. The sadness kills me, David. the question I have ...are these dreams of Heidie? Is this one of your poems spawned from the air?
My heart pulsing so hard and envious but I know you sometimes spin awesome poetry for no reason.
Sometimes collaborations which would credit your partner.
Such a man of mystery. This is the most beautiful one yet.
To read your words gives me such a feeling I can't even describe. Breathless and in awe.
Have a great day or night. I've never known you to be absent two nights in a row. I hope you're okay. Your friend always, Dessi

[Dave W.]

I have tried to write more but I think I am losing steam and it scares me.

[ETERNITY]

No, darling, you'll never lose anything. It is part of you like your tissue, flesh and bones. Remember what Bukowski said, "Don't try." It flows from you.

[Betty Hermelee]

A stunning yearning love scene you have created; there is so much passion and need for someone’s love and without it, it seems you are in great sorrow.. your words are strong yet very meaningful;
Lovely
Warmly
B🌷🌷🌷🌷

[Dave W.]

Not great sorrown but numbed sorrow that flares up every now and then if I think on things too much.

[Betty Hermelee]

You are welcome
Warmly
B🌷

[emmajoygreen]

'when i am without you
I am a stranger to myself'

that is so true because one is only part person without that precious other. - yet knows that isn't feasible but for most of the time, eyes search, ears listen..

Gently and beautifully written, Dave

[Dave W.]

Thankyou Emma, I hope many smiles for you and a pleasant weekend.

[emmajoygreen]

Many thanks and the same for and to you, my friend.