Complete me

Complete me

A Poem by Dave W.
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Just some more fun with themes, hopefull I can write into other areas........

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To drink your lips

my desire cries

 

lost and wandering heart

a hunger from within

 

complete me

in love’s embrace

 

a force from eons past

now moves my heart

 

what is your mind

what is your taste

what is your spirit

 

every part of you I need

every part of me longs

for your touch

 

in dreams we meet

a lifetime spent through the night

 

I am drunk on you

I have inhaled you

I am addicted to you

 

I would this spell take us

into eternities breast

that the cosmos be ours to explore

 

oh, that this fantasy take shape

that imaginations form

lay beside me tonight

 

there is no rest for my spirit

while you're away

 

constantly my mind dwells

in your mountains

I swim in your rivers

and lap your waters

 

come to me my love

the evening is at hand

 

there is a chill in my bed

only you can warm

 

my love these arms

are lonely for you

 

patiently I wait

in quiet I long

in hope I wish

in love I burn

© 2025 Dave W.


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Dave W.
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A wonderful poem for the desire of love Dave. When love is alive. Life is good and thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Months Ago


Beautifully written desires. Excellent poem

Posted 8 Months Ago


Dave W., I delight in your writings! They always seem to be speaking directly to the reader! I love how the crypticism is all consuming, each line seems to be toward one individual, however, reading thoroughly, one can see the possibilities could extend to anyone and everyone. My sister is a bit naive and, really, too outspoken regarding private affairs of the heart.
As for my opinion, your writing is clever and multi faceted. Great job!

Posted 8 Months Ago


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Ms claws

7 Months Ago

Sometimes, if we just leave things alone, they have a way of working themselves out correctly, siste.. read more
ETERNITY

7 Months Ago

@D. Mansfield Correction: I do love this Complete Me by Dave W. It rings softly of his Heidie and I .. read more
She loves it. No way she won't love it

Posted 8 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Dave W.
Dave W.

Tigard, OR



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I love to write poetry and hope that something I create will connect with someone that needs to read it more..