Hello Friend

Hello Friend

A Poem by Dave W.
"

close moments with someone you love is what really matters

"

Hello friend

hello

 

you who are faithful

you who criticize

you who love

you my heart seeks

 

was the day well

in your wanderings

was joy the light that guided

did love shine in your darkness

was there laughter in your voice

did your eyes smile with tenderness

 

truly I would know your tale

speak to me of your home

of your childhood

of your passions

of your pleasures

 

my friend

my dear friend

 

speak pleasant things to me

let me imbibe your candor

sit with me in silence

let us drink the moment

 

our time together is what my heart treasures

even if a word never passes

your eyes have said everything

in the darkness of night

your form is revealed in touch

 

my spirit seeks to know yours

my soul's desire is the embrace of your heart

© 2025 Dave W.


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Dave W.
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Dave W. This poetic beauty sings of your passion for your friends.
It is so difficult to talk in these messages, though, right?
My home is brilliantly colored Falls where we say, "Let's ride through the mountains and just look."
Even in the city where I live, the leaves are beautiful Fall colors in autumn and bright green now in Spring.
You are always so giving of yourself and rarely do you expect in return.
I wish you were real but I know you are just another dead account to fill these slots.
Your one comment on my EVERYBODY LIES was appreciated...kind of a fitting metaphor, wasn't it?
You're doing well at keeping this site going for the ones like me. Good job.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Dave W.

7 Months Ago

This is not a dead account, I just cooled a bit on writing, I always read your poems and you respons.. read more
Ms claws

7 Months Ago

@Dave W. I had no idea how much I appreciate your friendship.
Hi Dave W. I'm letting everybody know, this has all been an experiment kind of a prelude for my book, Addictions. No, there won't be any mention of anybody in person. Thanks for what I gained from knowing you. The book is not on this account. Well, you know this account is actually a dead account. Anyways, Thanks!
Oh, my review! I'd love to meet somebody who is "really" like this, unconditional love for a friend. But we know that is fairytale dust. You are the best.

Posted 7 Months Ago



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Added on May 23, 2025
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Dave W.
Dave W.

Tigard, OR



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I love to write poetry and hope that something I create will connect with someone that needs to read it more..