The poem feels claustrophobic, almost suffocating. It’s not just about noise-it’s about the impossibility of peace in a world that won’t quiet down. I enjoyed this.
I've felt that same way, Dave.
Sleep deprivation can make the mild into a monster.
My mattress sagged and I was ready to chop off the kitchen table top, lol. Truth.
Your poems always inspire. Thanks.
Be grateful for the noise, I say. Its a nightmare when the head sinks too deep into the a**.
Posted 2 Months Ago
2 Months Ago
Thankyou for the review, I was talking with a friend about noises that bothered me and it gave me a .. read moreThankyou for the review, I was talking with a friend about noises that bothered me and it gave me a poem
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Fine. I get that. But being hearing deprived is no joke.