Haze

Duke @ 01:03:2K9 CMB.SL

Scattered,
Splattered,
Shackled,
In Sloth, this Broth.

Sphere nor Square,
Darkness nor Glare,
Here nor There,
I Dwell;
in Scare…
-- That you might not be there..!

Reviews

[Holly Mason]

seeing things through a haze-
nice write truly
wondering questions without the answers -will you be there or not
thank you for sharing

[Effector Prime]

awesome!

[Jasmine]

excellent, I have no criticism for this. I like the alliteration and short, "stabbiness" of the lines. Wonderful work.

[PaleWriter]

A short introspective look at the feelings of dependence on another. Confusion can get the best of us when we're not comfortable in our own bodies without that special someone who's not there. Nice one.