Another Shot

Just my thoughts on something.

I'm gonna give it another go,

one more summer that should do.

 

Even if I get embarrassed or nervous,

I can't stop til August.

 

I'll see what he really feels for me this time,

but not give myself away like last time.

 

I might suceed,

or even fail.

 

But no matter what,

I'm gonna give this another shot.

 

Reviews

[McGee]

I like this poem but I think it has a very strange rhyme scheme which takes away from it a little bit