Melting

Melting

A Poem by Angie Diane♥♥
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...I think I love you...even though I know I shouldn't.

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Every time I talk to you,
My heart melts a little more,
Making me want to fall into you,
I can't believe this is happening,
I just can't take this anymore,
The melting of my heart,
Maybe I should just ignore you,
And never let you in,
Because baby every time I think of you,
My heart skips a beat,
I don't know what to do anymore,
I know I can't have you,
You will never be mine,
I am scared for myself,
Because every time I talk to you,
My heart begins to melt...

© 2012 Angie Diane♥♥


Author's Note

Angie Diane♥♥
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nice spacing of the repetition of "my heart begins to melt" Love certainly is a fickle thing empowered by a somewhat foolish, somewhat courageous organ. Nice use of ellipses at the end, adds to the actual melting into

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angie Diane♥♥

13 Years Ago

Thank you :D
poignant...it reminds me of My Secret Pain ;-) (shameless plug)

Seriously though, this was very well written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angie Diane♥♥

13 Years Ago

Thank youu c:
This is really amazing and Although its cute poem too..!! :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angie Diane♥♥

13 Years Ago

Thank you very much :D
aww this is so sweet, you need to make a leap of faith and who knows you could end up together:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angie Diane♥♥

13 Years Ago

I'm back.
K-mo

13 Years Ago

sweet!
Angie Diane♥♥

13 Years Ago

Lol for a while. I leave at 3:45
tell him!

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Angie Diane♥♥

13 Years Ago

Haha yep it would be.
The Mysterious Guy

13 Years Ago

birthday.. tomorrow..!! Wish u happy Birthday..!! :D

P.s: Sorry to interrupt in between.. read more
Angie Diane♥♥

13 Years Ago

Thank you :3
It's okay :D
O.O with whooooo? Criss????? Tell meeeee!

Sweet poem filled with desperate longing. I hope you get him though...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That_Girl

13 Years Ago

YES! Be like, 'hint hint' ;)
That_Girl

13 Years Ago

OMG what?
Angie Diane♥♥

13 Years Ago

Lol yeah...

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Added on October 18, 2012
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Angie Diane♥♥
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Hello, I'm Angie! I'm going to be 32 soon. Writing is something I love doing. I'm glad to be creating again. Also, I love anime, reading, and many other hobbies. Lately, I've been making YouTube v.. more..