Let Me Love You

Oh how sweet you taste,
Every time we lock lips,
Let me hold you in a sweet embrace,
I'll show you what love is, baby,
Open your heart for me,
And I'll throw away the key,
That is keeping you from me,
Stop holding back,
We should get into the naughty act,
Spread you legs for only me,
Let me show you how good I can be,
Oh how sweet you taste,
Every time your in my embrace,
Come on keep kissing me,
With your candy kisses,
Oh baby,
I'm enjoying this sweet embrace,
Just keep me chasing you,
And let me love you.

Reviews

[Mary E. Green]

This was really sweet. I love the emotion & the endearment of it. I was reading other comments & saw you say you're waiting until marriage, kudos to you. As someone who did the same but also wrote a poem as though I had it before I ever did, "Forbidden Passion", I will say it can be hard to wait, especially when you find someone you really love & want to show that. You can do it though. I did. Anyway, again great job on this write! :)

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you. I won't let any guy take advantage of me. I want to be strong and live my goal. I'm glad you understand. :)

[Danielle]

Very nice!

[Inda]

Love the chase. The best part and the part of this piece that makes it real for me, great job!

[JC]

almost seems like you wrote this from a guys view? open your legs for only me...which would make it parody? in any case i enjoyed it...

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you for the review.

[X]

This is wonderfully descriptive and sweet. It is dead-on in terms of your emotions and is a nice play on most romantic poems, as it is about sex and the love felt from it. Well done.

X

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you. I normally don't write about sex actually. I have never had it and I want to stay a virgin til marriage, but I still have these random thoughts.

[X]

Ah- the sign of a truly gifted writer- one who can emulate such passion and feelings without having been through it! Your words led me to believe otherwise. Kudos!

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you :)

[Bluefire]

Very descriptive, I like the flow of the story it tells, and the title.
Well done! ^^

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you.

[Bluefire]

No problem ^^

[x]

I love the taste of that!!

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you.,

[x]

Your welcome ;)

[Tasha]

I love this, nice imagery was well.
Favorite line: "We should get into the naughty act"
Very clever indeed sister.

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you :)

[Tasha]

You're welcome :)

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Hehe.

[Tasha]

hehe :)

[Angie Diane♥♥]

:D

[Tasha]

XD