Your Heart Has Changed

I just feel like writing.

It's been a couple of days,
Since the last time we spoke,
After the last conversation,
You told me your heart broke,
You never feel loved,
Nor do care about yourself,
What has happened to change your heart?
You used to care for yourself,
Make yourself look fine,
But now you won't even look at yourself in the mirror,
Without seeing the scars,
You placed them on your heart,
As well as your arm,
It hurts to see,
That you self harm,
You used to be different,
You used to be amazing,
But your heart has changed,
What could have happened?
What could changed?
You have no feelings...
For your love was pure,
But now it's not,
Just tell how to help,
And let me be the woman I can for you,
To make you feel special.

Reviews

[Antoñyo]

Minus the self-harm, this hit pretty close to home in my past.
Potent read,
Thanks for sharing

[Tricia O'Brien]

I dig, well done

Trish-

[SOUL LESS]

Prose, my dear girl. Quite nice prose. Not poetry. Cheers though! Nice thoughts. :)

[Angie Diane♥♥]

It's a free verse poem, really. No rhyme.

[SOUL LESS]

Rhythm would still be nice. Read this. It explains my point.
http://www.writerscafe.org/FanWarrior/blogs/Poetry-and-Prose/12603/

[Dr. Wood ?]

you must feel for him very much, this is quite beautiful....I don't think you need the repeat of CHANGED in the seventh from last line..I would leave that line out all together...just my opinion..thanks for posting this