Pull Me Away

Pull me away from the darkness,
That is clouding around my heart,
Pull me away from the pain,
That is being inflicted by you,
Pull me away from the room,
Which I've been imprisoned in,
Pull me away from it all,
To taunt me as I fall.

Author's Note

Haven't been writing as much. Haven't had a computer, but now I'm using my phone to write this poem.

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Angie,

Personal and touching

With Love,

A.

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you so much for the review :)

[Matthew Kult]

It was a pleasure.

[Rika]

Really nice, you told your feelings well. I always have to write it down on paper first even though my handwriting is chicken scratch XD. Nicely done keep on wrighting!!!!!

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you. C:

[Rhianne Ney]

impriosoned-Imprisoned (:

I can relate with typing on the phone for a poem (: I wrote mine once in a receipt (: since the idea is popping out that I wasn't able to literally HOLD it in (:

If these are couplets maybe it needs some space every two lines-if it is~

This is short but meaningful so there's nothing else to change but if you still want to think deep about it, you can always reread this (:

~Rhianne Ney

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you.

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

this cloud is a blanket for the nuclear reactor of the body your heart
this cloud of imprisonment that you call darkness
the pain shall subside like the cold November rain...and then be whole and new again

[KeeD]

Very cool, it makes the reader believe that somehow this cry for help is filled with hope only to be shocked by the reality of the ending. Great job

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you :)