You Cut Me Open

A poem that I wrote just to express how someone cuts me from the inside.

All I feel is pain,
I feel hated,
I believe love died long ago,
I feel all things that I loved have gone away,
My love ones cut me open,
I'm bleeding deep down,
You cut me open again and again,
You didn't realize how much pain I was in,
Your death will be forgotten,
I'm no one to you,
My heart has stopped,

Your pain is gone,
All along you cut me open,
You may not have realized that,
But realized you cut me open again,
Again and again I've been cut open,
By everyone by the one I love,
You cut me open for the last time.

Author's Note

I wrote it because people really have cut and hurt me.

Reviews

[Escape My Fate]

Greatly Written. You show pain really well in this poem

[Hippy]

yeah man sounds emo but it flows nicely

[maryjaneuy]

i just noticed that almost all of your poems really express sadness and hurt. still i admire you for writing very well though you're badly hurt. i can see it through your works. nice work. XD