Georgie

A poem on my friend that committed suicide.

His life was short,
His name was known,
His problems that caused him to do what he has done,
His thoughts led him to it,
His school life was terrible,
As I heard from my parents,
His brother was young,
Now he lost his older brother,
He needed to know that he was loved,
He was in pain,
He should not have done it,
He should not have died,
He died at sixteen,
I was the same age,
But he was a couple of months older,
I miss him now,
And now he is gone.

Author's Note

It might not make sense to you, but it makes sense to me.

Reviews

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

you must feel terrible pain at the loss of your friend,,,,,the worse is you were powerless to stop it.......but find strength in the thought that he knew a friend in you........you have certainly captured that sense of loss in your imagery......courage and continue writing.......

[Kat Plunkett]

aw 3: im so sorry for your loss :/ its hard to lose someone, expescially from suicide..

[Hippy]

yeah i feel you man the loss of a loved one to suicide is hard im sure writing this helpd somewat