Every Time

Every time I see your face,
Tears start to well up in my eyes.
Every time I hear your voice,
I daydream about you.
Every time I bump into you,
You smile and wave like you used to when we were together.
Every time you are around,
My heart beats rapidly.
Every time you hurt me,
I want to wrap up into ball and cry.
I miss you,
Please come back to me.
I loved you.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Escape My Fate]

Reminds me of someone. This is amazing :) Keep writing poems Angie, your really good at it. You display emotion very well, and your able to put your own personal experiences and thoughts into your poems. That takes a lot of talent and guts. Amazing :)

[Thomas Fleet]

Awe :(
So heartfelt and just...amazing. The first two lines were heartmelting. :s
All of your writing always has such strong emotions within it.
Thanks for sharing.

[JenLyn]

I can tell that you want to convey a lot of emotion with this piece but instead all I find are words. It seems more like a jumbled thought, not to say that the rules of poetry can't and aren't broken and that's fine. I just wanted to give you my honest opinion of this piece. Try to do a re-write and convey the emotions, imagery and metaphors always make a poem more interesting. Decent write, keep it up! :) And if you re-write please send me a read request?!? :)

[Rachael]

I like this more as a way to get your feelings down than a poem, but either way it's good. I love how the last line says I LOVED you, kind of like you still really like him, but only truly loved him then (only my interpretation)