I'm Tired

This is dedicated to someone that really hurt me. And if you know me well you do know who it is.

I'm tired,
Of you pretending.
I'm tired,
Of you lying.
I'm tired,
Of you saying what you wanted to say.
I'm tired,
Of the pain you cause.
I'm tired,
Of you breaking my heart into pieces.
I'm tired,
Of all of this crap.
Jump off a bridge if you have to.
You aren't worth it anymore.
I'm tired of you hurting me.
Maybe you should get out of my life.
I wish I could slit your throat and call it even.
I'm tired of this pain.
I'm tired of this lie you keep putting me on.
Why would you do that?
To protect your own hide or mine?
I'm tired of your face.
It's ugly and disgusting to me now.
I'm tired of all of your crap.
I will throw you off the Brooklyn Bridge.
I will make you hit your face on a locker.
Or something harder to make you bleed.
This is for you little dweeb.
Now get out of my life because I'm tired of you. 

Author's Note

Dedicated to one person I trusted most. Then he had to rip my heart out of my chest. My favorite line of this is I wish I could slit your throat and call it even.

Reviews

[PaperHearts]

Wow, a really powerful write! Your emotions came through so strongly in this piece, and I really felt the anger and frustration behind your words. There was certainly a sense of pain and heartache in your poem, and I thought that you did a great job in expressing this in the beginning, particularly with the repetition of the line 'I'm tired,'. Great write!
~PaperHearts

[Levioshock]

I feel the emotions in this

[Marlena]

This poem is too good for him. Just saying.

Very hateful, great emotion, and had a nice kind of flow to it, great work :B

[Micah_s5]

I can definitely feel the pissed off anger very well. The anger is projected out of this very well, got your point across very clearly.

[Michael X]

wow, that is vibrant in form and passionate meaning. the reader can really feel the exhausted feeling in every sentence. excellent job.

[AJChallenger]

Same as last time. It's a good poem, but I don't feel like you mean for there to be a pause after every line.

[Dream Catcher]

this was really good, it had a lot of emotion behind it! It was really heart felt and you could see the things that are bothering you in this. It shows how you release a lot of stuff in it, very good!

[J. Alexis Balaguer]

Really powerful. Your emotions here are raw.
Good write!
-Alex

[A.Lee]

I can tell this has a lot of emotion behind it. Very easy to relate to. It hink most of us have been there at least once. Nicely written.

[Kia-chan!]

So intence....It kinda feels like that kinda atmosphere, were She's like, "Oh no he did'nt", and he's like, "Oh yes I did!" 'ya, know? That kind of thing. Anyway, good write :D