Your Mistake

Your mistake was asking me out.
Since you said I wasn't appealing.
Your mistake was telling me you loved me.
When you really didn't love me at all.
Your mistake was using me.
Since you didn't want to tell me.
You didn't want to hurt me.
Your mistake was taking me everywhere you went.
You never wanted people too see that I was with you.
Your mistake was becoming my boyfriend.
Since you asked me out.
Your mistake was being my friend in the first place.
We were good friends too.
Your mistake was everything having to do with me.
Since you really didn't want anything to do with me.
Your mistake was putting your hands on me.
You didn't want to touch me anyway.
Your mistake was kissing me.
You made me cry when we first kissed.
Your mistake was loving me.
Since you never did anyway.
Your mistake was cheating on me.
You didn't want it to go down that way.
Then you shouldn't have done it.
I'm glad we're done.
Now my life has begun.
I can see the light now.
This was all your own mistake.
Losing me ended up killing you.

Author's Note

Reviews please.

Reviews

This is good, and very sad. Chocked full of emotions.
Sounds like he was a bit of a b*****d by the way.. So if he really does exist you are way better off without him!

[Thomas Fleet]

Another great poem and sort of sequel to your last.
I like the different point of views in these two poems.
Nicely done.
Thanks for sharing, Angela. :D

[Hippy]

i dig it man i like the combination of this one and the last one, maby you should make them one and have some badass ending idk its just a thought

[Moth Phoenix]

Nice poem girl!!! keep up ur awesome work :]]]]