My Mother

An essay I wrote in school. Tell me if it needs work.

           My beautiful mother who is full of life and wisdom has guided me through the tough times. She has guided me through the problems. She has helped me through my academic career. She is a very important person in my life. I learn valuable lessons to her. My mother has influenced me to do better in school.

 

            My mother has been there for me all of my life. From the beginning years to now she has helped me. She cared for me when I was in her womb. On the other hand she has raised me to do great things. For example she has taught me that I should achieve my goals in all that I do. She told me to achieve my goals in school. She also has taught me to not be afraid to express my opinions. To voice my thoughts and feelings about anything that I do. That helps in school. It helps to make me achieve good grades. Mother taught me to do my best. Most parents should teach their child that. They teach them to do the best they can and to show potential.

 

            When I was older my mother sent me to school. She still wanted me to have a great education. She wants me to succeed in all that I do. For example she told me to keep all of my grades up. She does not want me to fail anything. That pushed me to try to keep my grades up. When studying she makes sure that I know as much as I can. She would quiz me to make sure that I got the right answer. She quizzed me to see if I could comprehend was going on in school. I still try to study as hard, but I don’t always use her guidance anymore. Sometimes I will try to study on my own then quiz myself from memory.

 

            I am now a teenager and she still wants me to do great things. She wants me to have an education so that I can support myself. For example she did get a good education, but she did not push herself as hard as she wanted me to. For example she said that her parents did not push her enough to get good grades in school. Most of my grades are great in school now because she was there for me. If she wasn’t there I would probably be bad at school. I would probably not make the grades that I make.

 

            My mother has influenced me to achieve great things in school and in life. She pushed me to do well in school. I have learned that I need to be able to support myself from her. She has taught me to do well in school and make good grades. To move on to college to get a great job and a good education. She pushed me and helped me study. I help myself more now. She needs to know that she is the one that has influenced me to get great grades. To achieve something great in life and to express myself in my work. She knows what I want to achieve. She knows the field that I want to get into. She has influenced me to do better than she did in school. Not to fail at anything.

Author's Note

I need to know if I need to change anything.