Spring

When the snow melts what does it become?
It becomes Spring.
One of the best times of the year.
It is not to hot or not to cold.
Well it could go either way.
Not as cold as winter,
But not as hot as summer.

When the snow melts what does it become?
It becomes Spring.
Normally the answer would be water,
But to me it is Spring,
You know that it is going to a time where things start to bloom.
A time a pretty things happening.

When the snow melts what does it become?
It becomes Spring.

Reviews

[Luna Northstar]

I like it, I suppose you could make it LONGER, but you don't have to change it. I can see what ZoomZoom means that she wants you to describe things more, and I think thats a good idea, but i love the beginning lines, and the repeating. Nice write :)

[Kia-chan!]

This was a very poetic peace. P.s, I know where you got this from :) Very good!

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"You know that it is going to a time where things start to bloom.
A time a pretty things happening.

When the snow melts what does it become?
It becomes Spring."

{a gorgeous ode to Spring}

james:-)

[Inci]

a very sweet piece..i like spring too because as u say..it's not as hot as summer or as cold as winter