I'm Gone

I'm out of your life,
Because I left you.
I'm gone,
I said see you later,
Because I couldn't handle you anymore.

I'm gone,
You should be happy,
You had hated me anyway,
So I left,
And you cried.

I'm out of your life,
Because I left you,
And I'm gone,
And there's nothing you can do about it.
Unless you try.

Reviews

[Luna Northstar]

I love this poem. I like its really relate-able. Great write :)

[snapstache]

its good...but i guess its not what i like to read and stuff...like romance break-up. but its good for that category. as you'll notice most of my poems were like this in the beginning but now i'm a twisted person :) too many scary movies :p
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[watch_the_world]

This is beautiful. :)

[Nianque]

Love it. Strong and powerful. You are nobody's fool. Thumbs up.

[.]

"I'm out of your life,
Because I left you,
And I'm gone,
And there's nothing you can do about it.
Unless you try."
...Superb--
very strong--
empowering write!!!
...I Love It!!!

james:-)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a strong declaration through the written form~ I do like the ambiguity at the end which leaves the door just the slightest bit ajar~ well written~